Wednesday, November 9, 2016

Tuesday, November 8, 2016

i play'ed dogeball at ibreak2 and i won

Sunday, November 6, 2016

Time machine narrative writing


Hamish
Learning Coach:   Radha Moopanar      Date: 2 November 2016
Learning Area:        iDevelop: Speaking, Writing and Presenting                                        
Key Competency:   Using Language, Symbols and Text
NZC AO:                   Level 2 Language Features:
Students will: • Select and use sources of information, processes, and strategies with some confidence to identify, form, and express ideas.
Learning Observed
Ormiston Working Icon curiosity.jpgThis term our learners developed their curiosities in narrative writing. Hamish participated in workshops to plan, write, edit and present his writing.  The learners were introduced to narrative structure and language features.  Hamish used feedback provided by the Learning Coach and his peers to make improvements to his overall performance.  The use of a google document allowed Mrs Moopanar to provide ongoing feedback to the learners regarding their narrative content and organisation.  Hamish collaborated with other learners to practice and apply his presentation and writing skills.  The learners used devices to publish their narratives and used these publishings to observe, notice and make changes to their narratives. With support and guidance Hamish was able to share his knowledge and use appropriate structure and language to inform the audience.  It was great to see Hamish practice and apply his writing skills to develop an overall curiosity both at writing and presenting to inform.  Ka pai!
Evidence of learning
Please see the following links for Narrative presentation
Next Learning Steps
  1. Use a hook to grab the reader's attention
  2. Use the five senses to create atmosphere
  3. Use powerful verbs and adjectives


Monday, October 31, 2016

Irish


I like about the three   of us about r's  3

Friday, October 28, 2016

Curiosity


Learner: Lohit, Hamish and Stephan                                    Learning Coach :R.Moopanar      Date:  23 October 2016  Week 1-2                                         Learning Area: Science
Learning Observed
For the past few weeks the learners have been engaged in a curiosity quest!  The learners were given the choice of 8 curiosity quests which included: Why it is important to learn about eggs, imaginary planets, can humans live on another planet, why are New Zealanders called kiwis, how did dinosaurs live, telling the time and why is the solar system an exciting place - each of which would develop their curiosity.  Lohit, Stephan and Hamish enjoyed the first week of ‘discovery learning’ where they had some choices of tasks to complete to help them get familiar with the planets of the solar system and make connections to their prior knowledge.  They watched videos and created a KWL chart about what they knew and what they wanted to learn about the planets of the solar system.  They created a slideshow of their learning.  Lohit and Stephan also supported Hamish with finding information - great collaboration and leadership.  Thereafter the boys worked collaboratively to design and create a poster to compare and contrast two planets of their choice .  In order to create the poster successfully there was a lot of discussion.  They showed their curiosity, thinking and managing self skills by looking at what others had done and making connections to what they wanted to achieve.  See their presentation here.  
Evidence of learning

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Next Learning Steps
  • Create another, more complicated presentation
  • Share it on your blog and/or teach another learner something that you have learnt
  • Show the presentation to your family at home
  • Use other ways to present your work


Sunday, October 9, 2016

Hamish's Speech Narrative Assessment



Hamish
Learning Coach:   S Hooker & D Wilkes         Date: 2 September 2016
Learning Area:        iDevelop: Speaking, Writing and Presenting                                        
Key Competency:   Using Language, Symbols and Text
NZC AO:                   Level 2 Language Features:
Students will: • Select and use sources of information, processes, and strategies with some
confidence to identify, form, and express ideas.
Learning Observed

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This term our learners developed their capabilities in speech writing. Hamish  participated in workshops to plan, write, edit and present his speech.  The learners were introduced to persuasive language, speech organisation and effective speaking skills & strategies.  He used feedback provided by the Learning Coaches and his peers to make improvements to his overall performance.  The use of a google document allowed Mrs Hooker and Ms Wilkes to provide ongoing feedback to the learners regarding their speech content, organisation and persuasive writing. Hamish collaborated with other learners to practice and apply his presentation and speaking skills.  The learners used iPads to record each other speaking and used these recordings to observe, notice and make changes to their volume, pace, eye contact, body language and overall confidence.  
With support and guidance Hamish was able to share his knowledge and use appropriate language to inform the audience.  
It was great to see Hamish practice and apply his public speaking skills to develop an overall capability both at speaking and writing to inform. Ka pai!
Evidence of learning
Please see the following link:
  • Speech presentation (video)
Next Learning Steps
  • See the assessment rubric